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2006-05-07 Kiddalee: Take this with a grain of salt, because I don't listen to much rap but...[Kuzco]: 212.Rhimy things.SHOUT
Rating: 0.00 Uploaded by: Created: 2006-01-12 22:06:36Keywords: SHOUT!License:Free for private usageMy first attempt at "forced skills" if I have any. A friend of mine was really low and I had nothing left to say so I wrote him this. it has the f word once or twice. Other than that, it's pretty readable.
It's called:
SHOUT
Now…Listen to me
Cuz I’ll shout this so high
They’ll hear me in the infinity
Because I’ll shout…
So SHOUT!
SHOUT!
Shout for everything you have done,
SHOUT!
Shout for every obstacle and barrier you have overcome!
SHOUT!
Shout from your heart and soul, with body and mind
SHOUT!
Shout because you endure all the time!
SHOUT!
With your heart and soul, mind opened wide!
SHOUT!
Shout for everything you are and will be
SHOUT!
For everything you will have and see
SHOUT!
For everything you will accomplish!
SHOUT SHOUT SHOUT!!!
SHOUT with me, for you will not only succeed!
SHOUT!
But you will fucking EXCEED all expectations!
SHOUT!
Throughout multiple revelations and evaluations!
SHOUT! Because you are no clown…
Because… NO ONE WILL BRING YOU DOWN!!!!
I think you would make a really great rapper. I can imagine these lyrics arranged in a rap or hip hop song. The loud capitalized SHOUTs would be like a background harmony at the beginning of each line.
And what's really nice is that it's actually something more encouraging than the usual shake dat ass, ho or I'll bust a cap in yo ass garbage. I see this in all of your Rhimy Things I've read so far.
Oh, and I suggest you look up Slam Poetry.