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2007-04-14 sanctuary1: i really like this one. its very well written. you should be happy with it. its beautiful. 2007-04-23 Annie: This is an excellent poem, I'd have to read it more than once to understand everything I think but I LOVE the last two lines "Oh God/The gold is masked in fear" It reminds me of a tribal mask made of gold with the face of fear frozen on it. Beautiful and striking images. 2007-04-23 mousepoet: Thanks guys. I'm really overwhelmed at all the attention some of my stuff is getting. I'm not sure what to say. :)[mousepoet]: 243.mousey's Poetry.Please believe
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Without a passing smile
The world turns on and on
The people
Pressed and hurried
Hurried towards the marching dawn
Oh please believe there’s more to come
They beg their hearts to understand
But God,
Around us blood rains down
Oh God,
And death is close at hand
Without the taste of summer
The world trips on icy stones
The people
Never smell the warming air
And greening hills
Oh please believe that summer comes
They beg their eyes to see the gold
But God,
Spring is never born to us
Oh God
The gold is masked in fear