2006-11-26 Ethan Leon: Hmmm I do love this ever so much, thank you for your comment. But not all of my poems go on to be so depressing, I do have some rather happy ones. If you ever glance back over them. . .I would suggest 'afternoon paisleys' or 'sol' they are quite happy poems. 2007-04-16 mousepoet: Eh, I don't mind depressing poems, as long as that's not all the person writes. :) I've read some of your more cheerful ones, so it's all good.[mousepoet]: 243.mousey's Poetry.Sky
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Away the sky
With wings so blue,
So wond’ring now,
the sun so bright.
And naught was known
For all to see,
And soften’d still
The heaven’s blow.