[Emily]: 252.Dark and Horror.The Faery Jar | Rating: 0.00 |
2005-12-31 Kuzco: This story made me shiver...well done. The words are well chosen, as is the rythm of the story which is balanced and yet curious.
I only think the fairie should have shown signs of desperation more...accentu
Very good read overall, cheers. :D
2005-12-31 Emily: That's something I never could master, about her pain. I suppose it's because she's not really human, but... I don't know. Thanks for the input, though! This story is usually a favorite among the artists -- I've had a few people draw illustrations. Now just to figure out how to post them here!
I will have to re-write and post The Sycamerette's Tale, though.
2006-01-01 Kuzco: The Sycamerette's tale? You could just imput the ilustrations in the end of the story, in the very own doc file.
2006-01-01 Emily: I should. Now to dig them out of my HDD...
Yup, The Sycamerette's Tale. I wrote it shortly after completing this one. It's more comical than anything else. It won a contest in Elfwood's Woodwork e-Zine, a couple of years ago.
2006-01-01 Kuzco: hehe, wow. is it in your writtings here?
2006-01-02 Emily: No, it's not, as of yet. Lost the story a couple years ago. The edited version, at least.
2006-01-02 Kuzco: aww...