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[SleepingDragon]: 268.Erotica.An
Rating: 0.00 Uploaded by: Created: 2006-01-24 12:58:37 Keywords: AnnaGenre:ComedyStyle:short storyLicense:Free for readingWarning! This story is erotica, and is of a mature and adult nature. It contains strong adult situations and themes and should not be read by children or anyone offended by erotica.
That said, continue if you will. :D
This story, entitled simply 'Anna', is what I consider to be bonus material to War of Evelon, the book project I am currently working on. While the book itself contains no erotica, there are some scenes that are eluded to in the text. The following is one such scene.
A bit of Background on the story: The elves of Ori-on-Far are a multi-sexual and xenophobic society. They display affections openly and have laws mandating the right to multiple sexual partnerings. Anna Periwinkle, recently crowned Queen of the elves, is in love with the crown prince of Westgate. She has also, along her journey, experienced feelings of lust for a woman, her dear friend Gawain Wellington. Now understanding these feelings as part of her make-up as an elf and having been given leave to free partnering from her beloved Daemon, she will now exercise the rights she has inherited...
2006-01-24 Emily: Ooo, the fiery love between two elves, who also happen to be quite lovely. I really did like this piece!!
The descriptions were done fantastically, especially when we were looking over Ran-della and Anna.
The only thing that I have to comment 'badly' on is the name Daemon... if I remember correctly, isn't that name used in The Black Jewels Trilogy? 'Cause he was a sexy man... -drools in remembering-.
Overall, intrguing and well thought out :). I give it 5 stars!
2006-01-24 SleepingDragon: I never read The Black Jewels Trilogy. Who wrote it? Sounds like it might be good.
I'm actually guity of not reading other things that have the same names as my story. I have a female lead named Gawain, which I found out later was used as a male name in a popular story of King Aurther, etc. I've since seen Excaliber in which that character also appears, but I swear I never heard of the name before I used it for my book.
Thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice comments!
2006-01-25 Emily: Sure!
The Black Jewels Trilogy isn't exactly a 'man book'. I don't say this because it's full of sex, deceit, and political edge, but because they often speak of 'shaving' men (castration), and have one scene that is VERY, VERY, VERY DETAILED AND EXPLICIT... it made me immensely queasy to my tummy.
Basically there are good women and bad women in the book. The bad women use men as slaves and give them something like viagra, but they 'overdose' it so it doesn't feel good, it just feels bad. They strap the man down and then the women of the courts take turns riding him ... er, went out there, sorry.
Anyway, the books plots are good, but is Jaenelle or... something like that, and Daemon are really the only characters with any substance to them (well... Daemon's dad is pretty awesome). Overall, I think the books could have been WAY better... it could have such twisty, seductive political plots and better character development, but it was okay for the content.
Daemon is freaking sexy, though... oh good god -swoons.-