[SleepingDragon]: 268.Erotica.He
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2006-02-03 Emily: -Fangirl scream.-
I loved that!! Is it coincidential that he's been named Ryan in this story, eh?
Aside of that... wowdayum. That was a really good story and I was feeling it. I ache to say more, but I left notes for myself for when I judge!
2006-02-03 SleepingDragon: Oof! How'd that happen? See your messages [Emily]
...and thanks so much. :)
BTW I fixed a mispelling of 'Metal Heath', lol. There were two instances of it. That was not the name of the song or the album!
2006-02-03 fanfic_addict04: *Squeak* compared to this, my story sucks...
good luck, nice job!
2006-02-03 SleepingDragon: No way dude. Yours was awesome. Don't say that shit man.
Best of luck to you too.
2006-02-05 Kuzco: Very nice man. Made me remember that I didn't describe the characters in MY story :S pffft, always forget about that.
I loved it! The exhilaration and enthusiasm and, of course, lust is I think very well worked. Plus I loved the ambient that surrounded the characters, hurrah for your describing abilities and "eye". You gotta have an "eye" for it. HURRAH! ;)
2006-02-05 SleepingDragon: Thanks-a-mundo
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This exercise has got me thinking I may do a larger piece of work about the whole rock scene back then.
2006-02-12 *Amy*: I so wish they still had concerts there. i would be going every day!:P
anyway, great story dad. really enjoyed it.