[PhoenixV]: 638.Fool(s):a poem

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2007-12-01 19:00:05

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Fool(s):a poem

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Fool(s): a poem

Sweet sorrow to the fool
Wallowing in their deceit
Instead of in the pool
Which knows no defeat

Coupled with self-denial
Put a wall up with their lies
Cutting deeper all the while
Even in their midnight cries

Avoiding their hearts desires
Foolish mortals and their games
Exploding with emotional fires
Hard to extinguish the flames

Time consuming fools' opportunities
Wasting away inside
making up their bogus lies
No matter the times they've tried

Eventually fools are enlightened
Hear the truth one time
Some of them frightened
Others repeat their crime

2007-12-01 Tyr Zalo Hawk: their* and extinguish*... <.<;;;

I loved the poem. It's powerful and has a nice message to it. Definitly a must read, in my opinion.