Alright, judgment time! Don't worry too much cause you'll all be getting a badge! Alright, let's do this.

I've devided my scoring points between

Grammar and stuff - 10 points

Story wise - 10 points

Theme adherence - 20 points


[SleepingDragon]: 268.Revenge


Grammar and stuff: You pretty much rule at this "writting correctly" so you took it all, nothing to point out. 10/10

Story wise: It was alright, you don't really know how bad the girl got but the rest I can accept as good. Fast and good. 5/10

Theme: Points extra for the graphic details and well demonstrated rage. The act of revenge is, though, too fast but when someone's that enraged he doesn't really care. I give it a perfect theme adherence! 20/20




[*Amy*]: 271.Sweet Revenge

Grammar and stuff: Two punctuation errors, normally I wouldn't give a crap but I gotta show the difference between a perfectly clean slated entry and an almost perfect. 9.5/10

Story wise: Much more complex and entertaining. Past and present accounted for with one or two good twists in the story. Perfectly well thought out. 10/10

Theme: You didn't go for the graphical violence but emotional violence. Though in reality emotional sucks more (most of the time) that's not exactly what I wanted for this contest. But, in a way, it's still an atc of revenge. I wanted it excruciating and you gave me one, they suffered and they died so I'm still counting a good adherence to the theme. 14/20


[Fuzzysabeast]: 282.Not so Sweet Revenge

Grammar and stuff: Nothing I could find, clean slate as far as I'm concerned. 10/10


Story Wise: Between Sleepy D's and Kaydins Mommy. past and present accounted for; Motives all clear and you write it well enough but you're missing twists and some kind of...I dunno, it just seems rushed. When you're writting a story that takes up a few minutes, like Sleepy D, you should rush it but this kind of story, I think, should be taken slowly...developing it a little more.
Overall, a good read but nothing surprising or that complex. 7/10


Adherence to the theme: Heart attack? I mean, I can count the "getting the pills" and breaking into a decreptid old man's house and trading the pills like a little difficult but seriously though, no offense intended, but a heart attack's a few seconds of desperated not breathing and then you got eternal slumber. I think the author could have thought up a better and nastier act of revenge. 8/20



AND THE WINNERS ARE!!!!!


[Fuzzysabeast] at third place with 25 points!



[*Amy*] at second place with 33,5 points.



and.....


[SleepingDragon] at first place with 35!!

Congrats to the winners, take the badges and thank you so much for participating!! [SleepingDragon] I will read any of your work and review it. message me your choice once you're ready please.