Post nr: 5323 |
Author: pheonix1984 | Posted: (6528 days ago) |
Subject: Critique (Texts: 2 ) |
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Recently I have written a very short story based upon the legend of the sirens. However, I'm not completely happy with it, and was hoping a few people would be willing to read it and make a few suggestions as to what they liked and what they did not. Suggestions are more than welcome. Thank you :) |
Post nr: 5259 |
Author: Emily (Post your Faves :) favorite quotes) | Posted: (6556 days ago) |
Subject: Touchy subject (Texts: 4 ) |
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I have been assigned to write a screenplay and film an independent film in my film studies class on the subject of rape. |
Post nr: 5041 |
Author: RiverStar | Posted: (6639 days ago) |
Subject: Airport Horror Stories (Texts: 7 ) |
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I am going to be writing a play soon that will be performed next weekend. |
Post nr: 4899 |
Author: RiddleRose (Anyone still here?) | Posted: (6686 days ago) |
Subject: Background (Texts: 22 ) |
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Does anyone know where I can find some sort of account of the fall of Satan? I need some background for a story I'm writing... |
Post nr: 4898 |
Author: RiddleRose (Anyone still here?) | Posted: (6686 days ago) |
Subject: Dream Inspiration (Texts: 5 ) |
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I'm having some trouble remembering a dream I had last night. I remember parts of it, and sort of, the general feeling, but I'm missing a bunch of the details. I really want to turn it into a story while staying as true to the dream as I can, but I need the details. Any tips? And does anyone else here get tons of their inspirations from dreams? |
Post nr: 3990 |
Author: Jabbress (Plese join The Last Battel Please!!!!!!) | Posted: (6809 days ago) |
Subject: Help!! Trying to make a characte evil (Texts: 15 ) |
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In my book The missing peace council One of my characters,Lor |
Post nr: 3918 |
Author: Kiddalee (I'm here. Bwahahaha!) | Posted: (6815 days ago) |
Subject: Gleaning Original Work From Fanfiction (Texts: 10 ) |
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I have been dreaming up a fandom for the past few months. Note: dreaming up, not writing down. I just don't ethically support writing fanfictions. However, I am hooked on this story for the elements in it which have nothing to do with the original writer's trademark, things like flaming youth and broken spirits, and I know I have to write something down. |
Post nr: 3858 |
Author: dmeredith | Posted: (6821 days ago) |
Subject: A Site Full of Perfect Writers... (Texts: 9 ) |
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Hello! <echoes hello, hello, hello...> I guess the lack of activity on this forum lately suggests a bunch of people having an extrordinarily great amount of luck in their writing. Anybody got something to talk about? Some amazing new project you're working on? Anything at all? |
Post nr: 3767 |
Author: dmeredith | Posted: (6832 days ago) |
Subject: Readers Wanted! (Texts: 4 ) |
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As those of you who already know me have probably heard ad nosium I am nearing the end of the first draft of my novel (currently tentitively titled 'The Sankei Chrincles', but that will probably be the series title not the individual novel). I'm going to start pitching it this spring, but I would like some folks to mosey on over to my presentation and take a look. I always appreciate constructive critisism about anything, but specifically I am looking for some sort of concensus about which section of the piece would be best to send out as a sample chapter. I'll get the completed document up as soon as its finished, but most of what I've got right now is already up. I've proofed it briefly but haven't done significant revisions yet. I plan to work on that extensively after I finish the first draft but I will say that I've gotten positive feedback so far from the people who have been reading it already. Anyway, if anyone has got some time please take a look and let me know what's good, bad, and/or ugly! You can also check out the short pieces I've got up too, but you should probably steer clear of the academic articles unless you're really into English Second Language Education! Anyway thanks! <sits down in front of screen and waits for comments to come pouring in> |
Post nr: 3733 |
Author: dmeredith | Posted: (6836 days ago) |
Subject: Securing Your Document (Texts: 3 ) |
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This is perhaps a totally random comment, but it's a question I had myself. Before I sent out stuff I'd written I was worried about someone ripping me off. The question I asked people I knew who knew was what could I do to insure that I got credit for writing what I'D written. What they told me was honestly surprising. First, if you go to untoward lengths to protect yourself it can actually sour publishers toward your work. It makes their life more difficult in terms of getting the rights and they tend to feel upset by the distrustful attitude of the author, but there are things you can do. The easiest way to verify that your work is yours is to seal a copy of it in an envelope and then mail it to yourself registered mail. When it arrives do NOT open, but keep the sealed envelope for your records. If anyone ever tries to rip you off this is generaly enough proof to stand up in court, if you need to sue someone. It's really easy to do and anyone thinking of publishing should do it before they start shipping their stuff around. Good Luck! |
Post nr: 3646 |
Author: iippo (The Rater's Guild - Rate writings, kids!) | Posted: (6853 days ago) |
Subject: Letter writing (Texts: 15 ) |
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Some people are saying that due to e-mail and SMS and all that jazz, the art of writing proper letters is vanishing. So as I'm not much of a fiction-writer |
Post nr: 3007 |
Author: Metal Tsubasa | Posted: (6889 days ago) |
Subject: Writing a great death (Texts: 58 ) |
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I'm trying to work on a death scene, which is really important, because it's the death of a very famous god (in my story at least) and I've really come to almost... shall we say, befriend that character. I want his death to be really amazing and unique... How am I going to do that? |
Post nr: 1874 |
Author: Moorn (New name: Mister Saint) | Posted: (7098 days ago) |
Subject: Trying again (Texts: 8 ) |
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Let's say that a certain mammal is writing a historical fiction, based in a society that doesn't really exist anymore. Said mammal can't write his story without dialogue, but he doesn't really know how people of the time would have spoken. Does he just write as he normally would, or come up with some slang expressions or something similar? |
Post nr: 1448 |
Author: Moorn (New name: Mister Saint) | Posted: (7115 days ago) |
Subject: Synopsis (Texts: 4 ) |
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I'm trying to write a synopsis for my book, and it's proving to be something of a... well, let's say that my desk now has an imprint of my head on the surface. |
Post nr: 1382 |
Author: Moorn (New name: Mister Saint) | Posted: (7121 days ago) |
Subject: Formulaic Writing (Texts: 3 ) |
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Hello, all. I think perhaps the biggest problem I have personally in writing, and one of the ones I see most often when critiquing, is writing that tends to adhere to a particular formula. For example, most of my stories contain some kind of conspiracy/bet |
Post nr: 67 |
Author: Sairahiniel (New name: Kieli) (Oh, a peanut! My peanut.) | Posted: (7181 days ago) |
Subject: Empty forum... (Texts: 25 ) |
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*makes an echo* |